evaluation of hope harper monolugue

My point of view

What worked in your performance?

. I used a good monologue that related well to my character and gave backstory and insight into my characters life.

. I remembered my lines.

. I spoke in a childlike tone (relevant to my character)

What didn’t work?

. My body language didn’t reflect the age of my character. My character is six years old I chose to stand and walk around I could have sat on the floor, fiddled and adjusted my posture to how a child of that age would stand.

. I spoke in too soft of a tone. Due to stage nerves I tend to lower my tone on stage so need to work on projection.

. I focused too hard on memorizing my lines instead of playing my character. In order to fix this I must Work harder in not showing the thought process on my face and selling my performance.

Audience p.o.v

 

 What worked?

.the innocence of my character role. (The way I showed naivety when I thought the character of my father simply went for “rides” in police cars.

.the tone in which I spoke. (I chose to speak in a childlike tone as my character is six years old the audience reflected back positive feedback about this and said it work well but I needed to work on the body language of a child to complete my character. 

 

What can I improve on?

. The audience mention using my body langue in order to make my character appear younger.

. I also need to work on speaking on my tone of voice as I have a very soft stage voice due to nerves and tend to quiet down when I’m on stage so I need to work on my projection.